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Frost melts on the window, but I am warm. The sun slips through the cracks in the blinds as I lay in that peaceful tranquility of dawn, wrapped ion the quiet thud of my heart. His bare chest is soft and warm. Home. I hold my face curried in the comfort that is his love. His arm is wrapped around my shoulders, his chin resting protectively on the arch of my head. His opposite hand holds mine to his chest where I can feel the beating of his heart, in time with mine.

I remove my hand from his affectionate grasp and trail the muscles of his chest. My mouth creeps slowly to a grin as I tease the ripples in his abdomen, tracing them with the tips of my fingers. Then the warmth is over them again and I feel the gentle tug on my hand. Soft lips brush those teasing fingertips as one by one they are blessed.

I finally open my eyes and gaze upwards with yearning. Hazel, green; his eyes fill me with their wonder. They take me from my very soul, from any thought of normal reality and hasten the beating of my heart. His hand still holds my fingers, caressing them gently as he relaxes once more on the warmth of his chest.

We lie in passionate silence; lost in each others being as the sun rises higher and the birds begin to sing their love songs. The wind sighs in content as droplets of frost slide down the glass onto the window pane.

Then the sounds of commercialized morning as we are drawn from our peaceful reality. He leans closer and kisses my forehead, holding his lips to the touch of my flesh, breathing into my skin.
“I love you.”
My beating heart can only answer the same.
©2008-2009 ~baby-h
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:( if only this was real

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yet another idea planned then articulated in history...
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Ooooh, I love it...and, yeah...bummer, if only it were real. lol :)
Bahaha cliche much?? But that's cute =)

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so show me your soul and i'll show you mine
lol, yeah i wish!

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~~~ if you were a melody ~~~
~ i'd use only the good notes ~
lol, yeah i know! but cliche is what makes it cute! cause you wouldn't really want the love of your life snoring obliviously as you're trying to arouse them, would you? =P i mean, how often does that happen in your porny romance novels!

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~~~ if you were a melody ~~~
~ i'd use only the good notes ~
Yeah but that definitely sounds more realistic and like something that would happen in my life! lol
I don't know though, I guess, while it's beautiful, the problem I have with this is that it's intimate on a kind of shallow level. Like anyone can say those kinds of things about anyone. Maybe that's what your aiming for, the kind of thing that anyone can relate to. I guess it just seems that if there was that much love there'd be something distinctive about it, like a scar or a freckle or a reflex... just something that makes someone them, and is what you love.
Man, as you've probably guessed, I just woke up, don't mind me!!!

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so show me your soul and i'll show you mine
like i said when i saw it, its very sweet
and its not even too farfetched
i love the curried line, its good for lols (the visual anyway)

do more but go left or right, either a literal/matter of fact tpye peice. or one with heaps of metaphors.
i recon either of those would fit ur style nicely

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If today is all we see then tomorrow seems to me is just an illusion, we believe
awwww....you're so cute! i can't wait till you're in a relationship just so i can be like "awwwww!!!!" lol, so get moving!
yeah, i can understand what you mean, but i dunno, that's how i've always kind of imagined it. from all my movies and tv that i watch i've always wanted to be like that, but it also probably feels a lot more real to me as my fantasy than to you as a crappily written cliche =P

but when you start adding freckles and scars you make it someone, and don't leave it open to the possibility of anyone

oh well, lets just both agree i need to work on my storylines!

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~~~ if you were a melody ~~~
~ i'd use only the good notes ~
curried line? hmmm, let me reread my typos!

literal/matter of fact? metaphors? your good advice is falling on deaf ears =P
(in others words, i don't understand=D)

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~~~ if you were a melody ~~~
~ i'd use only the good notes ~
LMAO its meant to say 'burried' BAHAHAHAHahhahhaah!
i didnt even realise that, i judt thought it was an interesting choise of words

metaphors are falling on deaf ears?
wow elise you never cese to amaze me, waht a brilliant contradiction.

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If today is all we see then tomorrow seems to me is just an illusion, we believe

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